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You are there, Whenever I dream.
You and I, Together we are one. Whenever I dream.

Your touch is soft, your gaze is paralyzing.
We are meant for each other. Whenever I dream.

The earth does not crumble beneath you.
Rain does not pelt us. Whenever I dream.

The world becomes quiet when you speak.
Your voice completes my soul. Whenever I dream.

Your eyes are perfect, my heart cries for you.
Everything is perfect. Whenever I dream.

Come to me, you must hear my call.
You are my love, my life. Whenever my dream.

I hear your voice, feel your touch.
And it is as if you love me. Whenever I dream.
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My hand at Persian poetry.

Poem #11 of Castaway Crowns
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~C-Artie Jun 7, 2011  Student Writer
I don't care what type of poetry form is this (And I've never heard of it) I just know this is beautiful. Every word is strong but soft and make you feel like everything is going to be ok. Love it. Fav.
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~ZeroSkyler Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, ty, you don't know how much that means to me.
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Mood: Optimism ~C-Artie Jun 7, 2011  Student Writer
I was in shock because nobody had put a comment in this. This is just amazing and I hope you can keep up writing this amazing pieces of art!
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