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Clouds

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We Sit... 
         Under The Sky...
  Watch the Clouds...
                          Heart to Heart...
We Watch...
              Them Pass us By...
   They Watch us All...
                            Drift Apart...
                                   
Time... passes by
  So slowly it seems...
 Why... don't we just lie here
    Lost in our dreams...

We Stand...
             Under the Sky...        
   As the Rain...
                   Starts to Fall...
It Falls...
         To the Faces...
   So don't see...
                    Tears at all...

Time... passed us by
  So quickly it seems...
 I wish... we could have lied there
    Lost in those dreams...

We Sit... 
         Under The Sky...
  Watch the Clouds...
                          Heart to Heart...
We Watch...
              Them Pass us By...
   They Watch us All...
                            Drift Apart...
This is without a doubt one of the saddest poems I have ever taken the time to write...
It is meant to be read very slowly and quietly



I always read it to myself as a sad melody in the voice of Pete Yorn... But that's just me...

Poem #6 of Castaway Crowns
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You know I st here half commenting on artwork and half drawing. I don't know how you use this get watchers thingy thingy but I'll be honest and say I only use maximum two minutes on every piece. So yeah as I was saying I just spend time. Than all of a sudden I stumble upon this. I don't really know why I never get to see any poverty by using this may I changed some options somewhere... Anyway I see this. Read it. Stop. Put my drawing things away and read it again. than one more time and then again... I tell you it's it not often I find poems like these here on DeviantART! I was totally taken aback by this... this... I think I'll call it a life cuz I have this things going on about only loving living beings. And I can tell you I (And I usually never say this) Love this. Thank you very much.